tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3955669305471671236.post2582466333473213195..comments2023-04-05T17:56:00.953+08:00Comments on MR Wannabe Writer: Evaluation Checklistmr. khairul anuarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00903015763985427895noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3955669305471671236.post-43267599850739945932008-08-25T11:44:00.000+08:002008-08-25T11:44:00.000+08:00Congratulations. You have managed to come up with ...Congratulations. You have managed to come up with good writing. To write a better report, please consider these suggestions.<BR/>1. Omit the word yes!<BR/>2. Rephrase the sentence 'Yes, the textbook does consist of a useful table of contents, index but has not a glossary at all unless a word list'<BR/>3. No of after the word comprise. <BR/>4. Rephrase this long sentence'<BR/>We are slightly certain that illustrations, tables, figures, graphs, charts, etc. provide appropriate representations of age such as most characters in the textbook are teenagers, ethnicity – at least 3 races included, sex –males and females, socioeconomic level such as farmers, pilots, travellers, teachers, teenagers, children etc., and physical or mental ability.<BR/>Please submit your final writing to sariah1199@yahoo.com. Thanks.<BR/>SharifahTopicshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12426268088445313656noreply@blogger.com